Bloopander's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Debonair]

Nice hair and face model! A few things that could be improved to me are the eyes, eyebrows, and glasses. The eye whites look too grainy that I'm not sure if its supposed to be veins or something else. The brows look like they were texture painted rather than being hairy. For the glasses, the front frame looks too flat. Maybe add a bit of beveling to make them look curved so that light can shine one side? Other than these things, he looks pretty good!

HumanSoup responds:

Thank you for the feedback! I'll take these comments into consideration on my next project :)

[mamma mia]

Nice model! Though his shoes look unusually boxy, especially at the front. Other than that, its good!

[Boo boo bear]

Hiya, I'm just going to be proving feedback for the bear and the gloves. For the bear, a background would be nice so that the white parts like the ears and the mouth don't blend in as much. The nose could be sticking out as a plastic bit or as a piece of fabric. Since you are going for a plush look, you could give it a knitted or plush look to it. I'm not too sure of how to make a plush texture but for yarn, a displacement map should be fine. If you aren't sure of where to find a yarn displacement map, let me know! For the gloves, if they are going to be cartoony looking then I would say the texture is fine but if you are going for realism, some scratches would be good. The fingers look like they are separate from the base of the glove rather than attached to it. However that might just be me but if you see what I mean, then I can help you out with trying to make it look like the fingers are "welded" to the glove. Other than that, nice models and nice detailing/colors!

Nicolukas123456 responds:

Thanks for the feedback. Originally the bear had displacement based on a fabric texture, I am not sure why, but it did not look right (probably because of the low quality of the image [also for some reason the model as a whole would shift position]) but I agree with your observation. Regarding the gloves, I do understand why you see the fingers as being separate from the base, and that is because they are :v. Of course that is not what I want people to perceive, so I would appreciate your advice on how to make it look more realistic :D. Again thanks for your feedback, I checked some of the art you've posted and I like it a lot, I hope to learn a thing or two from what you make!